Centurion!!! :D

Today my blog hit 100 views. Thanks guys (n gals)! :)
This really makes me happy....it being only five days and all. (Tho I still wonder why no one will comment)

Well, I was going to put this up anyway, but I guess....! ;)

amid shattered places and a broken crown
thou just walk on, a joker, a clown
the love est laughing est thou, who, in thine misery, drown

where is thy fire? the flame?
art thou one of those, an animal tame?

the time hath come, the battle begun
choose thy stand or be undone...
the flames burn brighter, consuming all
pick up thou blade, else thy shall fall

how much longer may thou hold out?
look at thy people, how they shout...
the reason we fall is to rise again
there is much more tho thou than just hurt and pain....

there is so much more to the darkness of the setting sun
only for those willing to see it's beauty once begun
there is so much more to you than just pain
fight and and on, to bathe in the heavenly rain..




Well, this is a bit of an experiment. With archaic english. So any advice would be extremely appreciated! :)